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Kiru Retsuno Raikage
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| Subject: Kiru Retsuno Fri May 16, 2014 6:04 am | |
| Kiru Retsuno- Kiru Retsuno:
Basic Information:Name: Kiru Retsuno Gender: Male Age: 19 Nickname: Swirling Thunder Height: 5'10 Weight: 210 Clan: Uzumaki Bloodline: Chakra Chains Biju: None...Yet Shinobi InformationVillage: Village Hidden in the Clouds Rank: Kage (Posted in claims, will change if inapplicable) Element(s): Wind, Thunder Specialties: Nin, Tai, Fuuinjutsu (Seals) The ShinobiPhysical Description: If you have ever seen the Raikage, You wouldn't believe it was him. He wears a black hoodie, with black lined under the arms. He generally wears his favorite pair of gauntlets that are finger-less, and black as pitch. He generally wears the most comfortable pants he can find, thus they all look faded and less than regal. His shoes are simply sneakers of his own design, with Orange as the body color, and black as the side. There doesn't seem to be an ounce of regal posture in his brown head. Those that look into his seemingly empty orange eyes though, they know he isn't one to be trifled with. Clothing/Gear:He doesn't care for his Raikage hat, but when he does wear it, he has decked it out in orange, with two black stripes down the sides. He generally wears a black hoodie, with the words Raikage written in orange on the back. Under the hoodies armpits and down to his sides are orange as well. He seems to completely throw his air of authority out the window with a pair of faded blue pants that look like he simply throws them on after they have been cleaned. His shoes are Black, with orange stripes on the sides, which if you haven't been able to tell, is his favorite color. His gloves are completely black, with small steel studs on each knuckle. He carries a sword with a 72 inch blade into battle, its sheathe a bright orange, and its hilt a dark black. Personality: The Raikage has never talked about his past, and few even know how he came to the position. He is quiet spoken, and doesn't seem like the type to socialize. He tends to take short walks around the village, but he doesn't stop to mingle, as if he is simply an observer in his own home. He has been known to get brutally violent with enemies, and doesn't go to battle with anyone he deems unsuited for war. He does seem to enjoy a few things, such as taking a hot bath, or eating strawberry cake. He doesn't seem particularly fond of his sword, and keeps it off of him as much as he can. He is mysterious to those around him, and no one tries to get close. Most seem to be fine with letting their leader be. No one can see the sadness inside him. No one can see the loneliness. No one even knows his drive to protect the village. Its possibly because he refuses to lose anyone ever again. Likes: Strawberry Cake, Warm Baths, Pretty Girls. Dislikes: Being alone, Blood, Sadness. Background: - Spoiler:
The young boy was indeed born an Uzumaki. His father and Mother both had the blood of the clan that were called the "Strongest Seal" users. The first four years of his life were peaceful. His mother and father lived with a small sect of Uzumaki that were going around the nations to study their history. Even at four years old, Kiru learned alot about his clan and his people. He learned that their powers were based on Seals, and their common element was wind. He learned that one could obtain ultimate power by creating seals that boosted ones abilities past their normal limits. He was always told he wouldn't have to worry about things like that. That stuff wasn't needed anymore, and that his family could live peacefully. He never guessed that they would be so terribly wrong.
His father had a powerful cursed seal, and was considered pretty powerful by the Uzumaki they lived with. That must have been why he was targeted. They came in the dead of night. They slaughtered his people, and forced his father to watch. He had to watch everyone die. Kiru had managed to hide, but he could still see. He could see the way the soldiers acted like animals. They broke his father mentally and physically, until he revealed the secret of his seal. The ultimate seal, the cursed mark of the demon. They tried to take it, but his father wasn't dead yet. His body ignited in massive flames, destroying the camp in fire. No one survived to Kiru's knowledge. In reality, he should have died. He was too young to survive on his own. Instead he became strong. He trained his body all alone in the wilderness, and was noticed by the Village Hidden in the Clouds. He was taken in by them. He was fed, and kept warm.
They appreciated his strength, and after hearing his story, offered him the spot of Raikage, on the deal he hid his last name. Their old leader had died, and was told that if he proved his strength, he would be given the position. To this day, Kiru isn't sure how he passed the test, fighting off plenty of ninja that were also competing. In the end, he was the victor. Alone and in charge, his life truly begins.
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| | | Yukio Inuzuka Hokage
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| Subject: Re: Kiru Retsuno Mon May 19, 2014 2:27 pm | |
| There is to many uchiha on our site so you have to pick a different bloodline | |
| | | Kiru Retsuno Raikage
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| Subject: Re: Kiru Retsuno Tue May 20, 2014 12:18 am | |
| Fixed, made the Raikage thing make a little more sense too. | |
| | | Izuno Uchiha S-Rank Missing Nin
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| Subject: Re: Kiru Retsuno Wed May 21, 2014 4:38 pm | |
| I'm sorry again for the inconvenience, but can you please fix up the background. Just make it a nice paragraph because you had to change your bloodline. | |
| | | Kiru Retsuno Raikage
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| Subject: Re: Kiru Retsuno Wed May 21, 2014 8:32 pm | |
| I'm not sure what you mean? | |
| | | Kankri A-Rank Missing Nin
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| Subject: Re: Kiru Retsuno Thu May 22, 2014 4:38 pm | |
| Um, sorry or the bothersomeness, BUT!I believe Uzumaki are Konoha only.. so you might wanna change that up, also Izu not criticizing you but i didn't understand what you meant either... - Spoiler:
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| | | Kiru Retsuno Raikage
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| Subject: Re: Kiru Retsuno Thu May 22, 2014 6:23 pm | |
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| | | Kankri A-Rank Missing Nin
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| Subject: Re: Kiru Retsuno Fri May 23, 2014 4:18 pm | |
| Hmmmm, I see no problem here then.
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