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PostSubject: Kronus   Kronus I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 15, 2014 2:01 am

Name:Kronus
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Supplementary
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Range: Within 30m
Duration: Instaneous
Description:The user is able to control the momentum of one target. For example, if Kozai tosses a large rock at someone, he is able to increase or decrease the momentum of said rock.

The momentum of an object can be increased up to 2x, and decreased to 0x. The user must be able to see the target in order to control its momentum.

The target must actually have momentum to be controlled, obviously. The user can affect one target in his field of vision.


Extra Information: Every 2 uses, the chakra cost kicks in. Must have Kozai's left mangekyou eye.

1500 wc for mastery: can use 3 times before chakra cost kicks in.
XP Cost: 60


Last edited by Kozai on Sun Feb 16, 2014 5:12 pm; edited 3 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Kronus   Kronus I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 15, 2014 2:24 am

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PostSubject: Re: Kronus   Kronus I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 16, 2014 5:03 pm

Gonna straight up say this: No.

Take out where it says you can control up to three targets after you master the tech. You're getting this free without any work due to your MS. And don't say "oh, but I'm using counters" because that won't work anymore. If you get EMS somehow then this won't cost ANY counters and that won't be pretty. And the range? 1 km? No, you need to majorly decrease that.

"Every 3 uses, the chakra cost kicks in."

^Make that every 2 times you use it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kronus   Kronus I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 16, 2014 5:08 pm

Edited as ordered to in cb >_<
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PostSubject: Re: Kronus   Kronus I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 16, 2014 6:14 pm

Re-approved unless another mod sees anything...
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